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Shapeless Love (Free verse) by DeadtotheWorld

Shapeless thoughts in your mind Painless spots in your spine Don't worry Babe your still fine You'll always be the same, just divine You don't know, And you can't see You'll always be the same, just lovely I love you, and I hope you love me too I don't know what I mean to you All I know is that, I'm their for you Even through the bad and blue Even though I get you mad I never really mean to make you sad But now I'm just glad to be with you

horus8 30-May-03/9:13 PM
"---Black bile oozed between Grandfather's lips, and
dripped onto the attendant's bloated abdomen. The
drip became a trickle, which became a steady stream,
and soon he was vomiting a thick torrent of the
shining liquid.
---Where it touched the attendant, it boiled and
frothed and formed a sickly lather, and as it
bubbled it ate away at the flesh. The skin on the
man's stomach was becoming liquid and starting to
slide around. Beads of blood sprang up where the
upper layer had been completely dissolved.
---Grandfather's head lolled forward, and underneath his
bushy, flaking eyebrows, his blind eyes rolled
insanely. With a sudden fluid movement of his arm,
he unhooked the straight razor from its holster and
flipped out the dull blade. It was just as he
remembered.
---His obscenely gnarled hands trembled, and his
breath was rapid. Grandfather hunched over the
attendant, reaching out and stroking the places that
had been prepared by the mucus. His jaw still hung
slightly open as he bent down for a closer view...
---And Grandfather began to shave."




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