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Obsequies (Haiku) by horus8

Warpd metal, poppd tires July crackd watermelon Retird Harley cops "The fucking priest died?" Youngman family coffin "Here, read these instead."

Shardik 28-May-03/4:19 PM
really, oh well, have you tried acupuncture? Because, once you go East sweet heart a simple 'fuck you' becomes bland, and I, dare say, would dread the thought of that, so i'll just save my clever insults for stuffed animals and parsley snips, but not you, not ever you, since I don't care for you remember we have an enmity which allows me to, well, toss my goats in your gulley, crevase, gorge, sinkhole, pit, dent, tunnel, browneye, shaft, canyon, ravine... ah well. I'm sure you get my drift. Speaking of drift, do you feel a draft?




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