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Obsequies (Haiku) by horus8

Warpd metal, poppd tires July crackd watermelon Retird Harley cops "The fucking priest died?" Youngman family coffin "Here, read these instead."

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 28-May-03/3:40 PM
There's a fine line between "clever insult" and "meaningless obscenity" which you don't seem to quite have the hang of.




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