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Obsequies (Haiku) by horus8

Warpd metal, poppd tires July crackd watermelon Retird Harley cops "The fucking priest died?" Youngman family coffin "Here, read these instead."

unsubscribe 28-May-03/2:35 PM
I suppose alot of people don't understand these, but yeah - you got to the heart of 'em. Oh, that was a great comment on my "What She Knew" It is true, I just got off parole, and I have one daughter who grew up in "the life" but managed to rise above it. She writes and submits here - Vipersna - I've read your comments to her. It all makes her even stronger.
Anyway - about your Haiku - keep it up!




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