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Timing (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

The tick-tock-tick of the walls, pictures, windows, has me inhaling the stench of sterility while the high point in my eyes blackens the room and definity falls away.

INTRANSIT 27-May-03/8:47 PM
Well, you're definitely a right hand drive, that's for sure. That is no advertisement. That was well engineered art. period.
Ask that troop how are they gonna top themselves? Thanks for the sock in the gut blasting me backwards into a reality check!!!! I still got an appointment though. gotta start someplace.




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