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Nicotine Ruse (Free verse) by Red_is_life

Ballet Dancing ash tray amazing ballancing ciggarette. Chimney smoking lung destroying air burning. Lead me to my death.

shwenatjadeflower 16-Jul-02/11:52 PM
i think the thirrd line shoud be swithched to say cigarette balancing, but its kool.




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