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My girl (Sonnet) by simone_girard

Tynesha you are my special girl Your precious and beautiful like a pearl I'm your mummy and I love you true The apple of my eye that is you To feel you growing inside of me Was the best feeling that could ever be You were given my eyes and my nose But not my ears, thank god not those You were blessed with the most beautiful smile And to see it made sleepless nights worthwhile I was so happy to hear you talk I almost cried when I saw you walk Cause your babyhood slips by so fast And pretty soon it will be past But you were born to me because of love And each day I'll thank the lord above.

diamondwife 24-May-03/1:55 PM
Ahh...the joy of the internet, you have no idea what my face looks like. I could be model material, I could look, well, the way you describe me. But, alas, it matters not, as that is not the issue here. What I really want to know is why you are attacking me when you obviously agree that this poem is awful. Are you threatened that someone else besides you has an opinion? Let's remember that all we really know about each other, or anyone on this site, for that matter, is the words that are written here.




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