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My girl (Sonnet) by simone_girard

Tynesha you are my special girl Your precious and beautiful like a pearl I'm your mummy and I love you true The apple of my eye that is you To feel you growing inside of me Was the best feeling that could ever be You were given my eyes and my nose But not my ears, thank god not those You were blessed with the most beautiful smile And to see it made sleepless nights worthwhile I was so happy to hear you talk I almost cried when I saw you walk Cause your babyhood slips by so fast And pretty soon it will be past But you were born to me because of love And each day I'll thank the lord above.

simone_girard 23-May-03/8:07 PM
As I have said before, I never claimed to be the best writer in the world. Also as I have said before, this is not one of the best poems I have written. I think that if you feel so strongly about the way I have written this I would really like to see an example of how you would have written this. I have read some of the poetry you have written on this sight and you are a talented writer, so I would love to see a better version of this poem.




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