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Symbol Of Love (Sonnet) by simone_girard

Father weeps and mother cries As a newborn baby closes her eyes Nobody knows why she's gone Her mother and father's hearts are torn Doctor said he did all he coulda Father says maybe I shoulda But mother only lays silent and sad Knowing things have never been this bad People come to show dismay Hold their hand and have their say It's for the best they will hear Even when the tears are near So they say goodbye to their symbol of love As their baby moves on to god above Now all that they felt was their gladness Is turned entirely to heartache and sadness And now the time has come to mourn Although their baby was just born But in years to come when they look above That star they see will be their symbol of love.

simone_girard 23-May-03/7:19 PM
What is it with you. Do you always have to stand up for Shardik. Is he so fucking dumb that he cant reply himself. As for your comments on my poetry I could care less what you think of it. The only reason it is her is so that people with an intelligent comment can have there say. This in idiots terms ( just for you and your bum buddy) means if you hate it tell me why and how to improve it. I am the first to admit that I am far from the greatest writer in the world. My spelling sucks, My vocab is pretty limited and my imagination is probably not vivid enough. But that doesnt mean that you or anyone else has the write to put shit on me. I put my poetry on here to have shit put on at at times, not me. If i wanted you or your friends to put shit on me I would have put myself on here.




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