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Death Of Day ( re-edit) (Haiku) by Mr Pig

Dusk came, Sun bled coagulating the clouds. Silver assassin appeared.

dougsoderstrom 23-May-03/12:22 PM
No haiku since it contains 18 syllables rather than the required 17.




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