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Symbol Of Love (Sonnet) by simone_girard

Father weeps and mother cries As a newborn baby closes her eyes Nobody knows why she's gone Her mother and father's hearts are torn Doctor said he did all he coulda Father says maybe I shoulda But mother only lays silent and sad Knowing things have never been this bad People come to show dismay Hold their hand and have their say It's for the best they will hear Even when the tears are near So they say goodbye to their symbol of love As their baby moves on to god above Now all that they felt was their gladness Is turned entirely to heartache and sadness And now the time has come to mourn Although their baby was just born But in years to come when they look above That star they see will be their symbol of love.

simone_girard 22-May-03/8:34 PM
Firstly you fucking idiot, this poem was not written about my daughter. It is about my bestfriends daughter who died of SIDS. Secondly if the thought of fucking a 4 year old gets you off, I suggest you not worry about me being sterilized, unlike you who should have your penis removed. On the other hand Tynesha's daddy says feel free to leave your address, as he would love to fuck you up the arse with his size 14 boot. I think I would be right in thinking in every day life you are the person that no-one wants to know. You have very few friends and had a pretty shitty home life. That to me explains why you feel the need to put everyone else's writing down, to make yourself feel better.




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