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WorkingDream (Free verse) by harrytuttle

Miscellaneous pieces of metal, and numbers, Chase me around the room. I try to escape Jump up on the dresser Roll under the bed Crawl toward the door But it is useless, they will prevail, I will be engulfed. But then I wake up

ButterflyMel0123 16-Jul-02/9:45 PM
This would be a good poem. Unfortunatley, it just seems that you are describing a dream other than expressing it in poetry.




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