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Milkshake until beef jerky (Limerick) by horus8

There once was a mad cow from Ontario. That would wobble and foam in stereo. She was an udder disaster. Since protein is faster. Then your butcher's alarm/clock radio.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-May-03/5:32 AM
Every line of this follows a different scanning pattern. Also you used the wrong "then" and you have incorrectly punctuated the entire piece. Great work!! -=10=-




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