poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on My girl by simone_girard.

diamondwife20 May 2003

Is "the lord above" in everything you write? And if that line must be there, can you find nothing else to rhyme it with than love. I'm sorry, I usually try to give the benefit of the doubt but these are too insipid and predictable. They look like something I would have written when I was 10.