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Darkness (Sonnet) by Felzpoet

Darkness has set on another day Darkness has arrived, leaving nothing Darkness so dark, nothing can play Darkness so cold, killing everything The black hole has sucked me in The black hole grips on tight The black hole keeps me within The black hole, I can’t see the light The void in my heart has widened The void adds to my seclusion The void has continuously deepened The darkness has taken me over Lifting the weight of the world from my shoulder

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 19-May-03/6:05 PM
yeah i guess you're right how can i possibly win against someone whose only comeback is to keep mentioning how important it is to 'get laid'.




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