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My nieghborhood(1) (Lyric) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

My neighbor is in the KKK A proud member of the NRA Since 1984 So don’t knock on his door His wife isn’t very thin She wears shirts that cut into her skin Her lungs get smaller by the hours From all the Marlboro lights she devours Their 13-year-old daughter dances naked for all the world to see Her window is the one right across from me She’s looking for sex cause she doesn’t know love Has no clue, No idea about the meaning of Come 6 o’clock without fail is world war 3 How they survive is mystery to me

INTRANSIT 17-May-03/1:33 PM
rewrite. and concentrate on giving this a beat. it's well done and deserves the attention. tend to it.7 looking for a 9




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