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Sanctuary (Free verse) by Lolly

The world passes I watch from the peepholes neither friend nor foe is welcome here I am hunkered down waiting watching deep within the watchtower protected hidden well in the gray folding hills silent listening to the rush of rivers undetected safe sanctuary within walls of thick skin

Lolly 13-May-03/2:35 PM
Thanks for your input. I am thinking of changing the last line.




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