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My final poem (Free verse) by lee's tommy

My whole world is crumbling, there's nowhere i belong, behavior so egregious, no sense of right or wrong. I hold me in contempt, i charge myself with crimes, and guilty is my plea, now it's judgement time. What befit's the man, where punishment's to soft, a man you can't reform, this man we must cut off. To let him carry on, would be a sin to all, HELL has he unleashed, so HELL should be his fall. He even punished love, his one and surly last, so bid the beast farewell, as he breathes the silent gas........... TNX

lee's tommy 9-May-03/1:01 PM
Pardon? can you please induldge a simple man like me?




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