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To Lesley (Free verse) by Bahookie

I truly love another Myself is put aside Your self soft skin burning A heart in my hand

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 8-May-03/1:13 AM
Hey, that's some real good shit, kid. I bet Lesley will really appreciate it!! Why don't you make some sort of multimedia presentation out of it? You could cut out the shape of your love from a single sheet of moistened cardboard, mount it on the very fabric of your being with a stapler of trust, and then shove it into Lesley's face and grind it back and forth until Lesley doesn't have a face anymore, just a sticky bulbous liquid red mass and you're screaming and trying to wake up but you've really done it this time, you sick fucker.




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