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THE MISSING HEART (Sonnet) by Prince of Void

A MISSING HERAT FOLLOWS SWEAT SMELL OF ROSES THE WONDERS SETTLED DOWN IN LAST CHARMING EYES AND NIGHTMARE FELL DOWN IN THE FACE OF SMOOTH SUN THE LOUD VOICES TRON SILKY DREAMS OF SKIES THE BLANK PAPER FACES THE WORDS OF BIRDES AND MINE THE SIMPLE BEAUTY FLEW AND RESTTING ON REYS THE HURTS OF YESTERDAYS WAS LEFT BEHIND FAR BEYS RIDING THE HORSE TO EDIT EAST AND WEST SUN IN DAWN OF MY LOVE

andrewjthomas 5-May-03/10:32 AM
this is not a sonnet, you should look up the structure...
sonnets are strictly iambic pentameter, you can deviate a little, but not that much
you also follow a strict ryhme scheme depending on the type
english sonnet for instance is: abab cdcd efef gg
that last couplet (gg) should answer the previous stanzas somehow




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