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moments lost in adversity (Free verse) by brazen

dropping the tangible life swallowed by muffled dreams i drug a motion in you pulled you away from the flame but all i had to live by was the ignorance of your lies and the brutality of your game. broken in the wind up north disdain pours across the mound filling your mouth with words that mean nothing to the heart as they follow your endless drought into a valley of misdeeds distorting all my optic feeds. silence is a bliss forgotten when i stare into your world never thought i'd dream of living the last day as it has unfurled...

Blindproject217 28-Apr-03/11:13 PM
Im not so sure you could live by the ignorance of someones lies, unless you yourself were dumb enough to live by a lie that was ignorant. The first thing that comes to mind is following a religion that requires you to eat dog crap five times a day or the earth would swallow you whole. Now that would be living by the ignorance of someones lies. But anyways I liked the poem, -6-




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