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Lost love (Free verse) by Mikius

Pain Shoots through me Like some sword-wound, deep in my heart Someone has cut open my chest But it’s not, It’s just love Just maybe, somewhere along the way I got lost. I love her. I never meant To hurt her so. To scare her or use her Inside and out Like something Something to be used No I love her Now she has left Left me alone With my thoughts With my mind Dark and twisted Poisonous thought Taking root Evil No I never meant to hurt her Or scare her so I love her I love her

Bobjim 28-Apr-03/3:59 PM
YOUR PUNCTUATION IS BUGGERED! YOU ILLETERATE GOON!
I OUGHT TO BEAT YOU TO DEATH WITH A DICTIONARY!




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