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Death Of A Rose (New draft) (Haiku) by Mr Pig

Petals fall like tears, The arid earth is washed In beautiful blood.

Blindproject217 27-Apr-03/2:51 PM
Petals from zuzu's hand
its not such a wonderful life
Curse the prawnes that did this

Now THAT is a beatiful haiku, even though its 2 slys over the seventeen limit, but hey if Mr pig can get away with it so can I.




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