Ranger27 Apr 2003

How's this:

Well, although she longed for a Prince
My three gifts of happiness, friendship and a
'Get Out Of Jail Free' card
Went unrecognised
Intercepted, perhaps, by the scheming witch downstairs
Either way, I had a kingdom to manage...

Thanks for your continuing advice, hopefully this poem will reflect it. I'll carry on working on this one and edit it a couple more times, and appreciate all the feedback I get. Thanks all.