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Death Of A Rose (New draft) (Haiku) by Mr Pig

Petals fall like tears, The arid earth is washed In beautiful blood.

richa 27-Apr-03/5:01 AM
Interesting, you seem to have changed the tone of the poem wildly by changing one word

very charming




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