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Death Of A Rose (New draft) (Haiku) by Mr Pig

Petals fall like tears, The arid earth is washed In beautiful blood.

BleedingRose 26-Apr-03/6:54 PM
I love it! i think ill jot this one down in my little book. Though i cant give it a perfect score because of the whole haiku problem which others have already pointed out . but id love to see a revised edition!




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