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I Speak of Expanses (Other) by anitawit

Sunflower midst I thought I'd be Yellow fields stretched around me Blue of the sky as far as I see Expanses, I speak of expanses Starlit sky of a moonless night Prussian universe for my flight Into this deep darkness I alight Expanses, I speak of expanses Wild black ocean lashing land Tugging at me as I sit on sand Compelling me that I expand Expanses, I speak of expanses Dark green mountain-forest trees Murmuring to the fingering breeze Whispering once more of release Expanses, I speak of expanses

richa 26-Apr-03/10:19 AM
nice use of repetition




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