INTRANSIT26 Apr 2003
Very well re-worded chap. I was a little tired whn I read it the first time. The elimination of the giving up helped alot. I prefer it without the humor, however,YOU thought it fitting. Therefore it has value.
A wise poet said to me: Don't write to make others like your poetry. Write to make them think.
This above all: To thine own self be true.
Shakespeare.
Keep up the efforts, they are paying off.