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Death Of A Rose (New draft) (Haiku) by Mr Pig

Petals fall like tears, The arid earth is washed In beautiful blood.

INTRANSIT 26-Apr-03/5:47 AM
I'm no haiku expert but I find this quite beautiful. My mind snags the petals on the thorns and they never reach ground though.




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