Ranger26 Apr 2003

I'm not sure that god'swife classes herself as anybody's coach, but she gave me a lot of help with this one. However so have you with other poems of mine so I should say thank you to you as well.

(Thanks INTRANSIT!)

You're right that the woodsman part was supposed to inject a bit of life into it...and I'll have a look at making it appear less as though I was giving up.
Thanks for your thoughts on this, I think it'll need editing a few more times before it's complete.