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Landscapes In The Sky (Free verse) by anitawit

(17.7.95) Yesterday evening there were lots of landscapes in the sky To choose from; I visited the remotest of them all Embarking on a cloud I floated past Mysterious blue shadows And crystalline waters that held no reflections Past rosy flecks preening themselves in the setting sun Past deep darknesses recessing irregular pieces of light Past slashes of hypnotic blue that hinted at the endless, Through ripped centres of the surface Myriad of this new dimension I explored on a cloud -- One of many that inspired the landscapes Yesterday evening, in the sky.

INTRANSIT 25-Apr-03/6:49 AM
I think myriad(s). I think when you wrote this, you sat down and wrote without thinking, just wrote. and it works. 8 I think the other is better because you put work into it. both are swell.




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