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For my wife
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INTRANSIT
She holds me like a soft summer breeze and kisses me with a doves wing. And when we make love we hold hands and become a placid pool.
richa
22-Apr-03/10:55 AM
Lead in with gentle cliches
then bang ' a placid pool' really makes this short poem
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