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Leaves (Free verse) by danny duke age 9

Leaves. Leaves in the breeze I like to see them falling down Round and round they go Not a sound I hear Only the wind so near So blow wind blow Blow in my nose And down my toes until i freeze until i feel the sunshine blowing the leaves

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 17-Apr-03/9:56 AM
If he isn't a 9 year old, how brave is his effort? I think bravery of effort is inversely proportional to age. I also think bravery of effort tends to infinity if you are disabled. Here:

bravery = (1 / age) ^ (are_you_special)

where

are_you_special = 1 / (4 - number_of_wheels)




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