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Leaves (Free verse) by danny duke age 9

Leaves. Leaves in the breeze I like to see them falling down Round and round they go Not a sound I hear Only the wind so near So blow wind blow Blow in my nose And down my toes until i freeze until i feel the sunshine blowing the leaves

Caducus 17-Apr-03/8:28 AM
Hey Danny !

If you are indeed a 9 year old this is a brave effort mate. Good use of rhyme and you stuck to to the subject well. Keep writing and good luck with your poetry heres an 8.




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