Mr Pig12 Apr 2003
Thank you so much for your comments I perused them with interest. I agree about s1 line 2, and the blasted spellcheck does not suffice with German Aviation.
The river waiting for a mudslide is suggesting that my purity is waiting for the filth that I associate with affection. Once the mudslide occurs I am in a sense purified, normal, at peace with giving myself emotionally and physically. As soon as these emotion emerge again I will take light of your constructive suggestions and re-edit. For now farewell all.