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the photobooth (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub

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god'swife 11-Apr-03/9:18 PM
Belly grabs me, and casket.
Great use of the sound in words.

black & white
stripped, and pinned.

eerie upright...

close, hide, awaken.

the way her eyes darkened.

your words are beautiful. They ring, like a peal bells, or laughter.




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