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bottoms up (Limerick) by suckmychucks

Drinking is bad for your bladder. Don’t drink when you're climbing a ladder. And unless you're a pro with a rake and a hoe, Don’t drink when you're using the latter.

thepinkbunnyofdoom 11-Apr-03/3:30 AM
I found this to be witty because, unlike your others,this one was quite funny. Maybe its because it is the name works so well, or maybe its just the image of someone drunk falling on their bum. Either way its much more humorish and has an appeal that the other pieces you wrote. Anyway there is clear mental image and a sense of FUN in its inmature nature. Your others lack in that fold.Therefore I deem this piece worthy of reading unlike the others.
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