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two flies (Limerick) by suckmychucks

two flies fucking on the wall- one is a horse fly, one's kind of small. it's nothing to think of just something to see. darling, i'm busy come inconvenience me.

thepinkbunnyofdoom 10-Apr-03/5:10 PM
Not Very Witty
Not Clever Enough to Be Gay
A horrible piece
I'm forced to say
I wasn't amused in the least little bit
Whining worse than even me
Which is hard I'll admit
A zero I'm afraid it has to be
Thats all you get




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