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two flies
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Limerick
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suckmychucks
two flies fucking on the wall- one is a horse fly, one's kind of small. it's nothing to think of just something to see. darling, i'm busy come inconvenience me.
razorgrin
10-Apr-03/11:11 AM
The last line doen't scan. Instead, it irritates like the whiny voice of a zitty teenager. Which, if you think about it, makes sense.
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