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the photobooth (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub

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Mr Pig (again) 9-Apr-03/5:19 AM
Mellifluently told ! Remember when taking on board the sound advice and suggestions given be careful not to disrupt the poignanancy you have masterfully created in here. perfection is a bridge too far, but by golly its in sight. Well done my boy on a bloody fine poem 10




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