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Stars In My Eyes (Free verse) by onlyontuesdays

You've left me here. I'm lying here all alone on the bed, The spot beside me still warm, As I roll over and over and over, Just trying to catch some sleep As it eludes my wandering mind. I muffle my sobs with a pillow, And try to blink the tears from my eyes. Then I feel your hands, Strong, Warm, And loving, As they run across my shoulders. I smile, And blink the stars from my eyes As the nightmare fades from memory, Replaced by the beautiful reality That is you. You kiss me awake And hold me, Whispering that you love me. And I know I don't have to say, Because you already know, That I love you, too.

cyberian54 15-Jul-02/9:31 AM
Too Hallmark for me, no depth.




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