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the photobooth (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub

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<~> 6-Apr-03/9:27 PM
maybe you could say something like, "across the whole of ontario" to clue in the reader? because i'd venture to say that 90% of the people reading this are going to think you mean the london in UK, and go ,"huh?" like i did, unless you drop a clue to alert them otherwise.




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