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in love with jane doe (Free verse) by crin

your eyes are the eeriest shade of pure pale green your eyes are more beautiful than the universe you're curls and curves in all the right places a silhouette a shadow casts you're the most perfect mess you're shattered glass and i see my reflection in you seven years of bad luck if only i could be so lucky

harrytuttle 15-Jul-02/6:50 AM
I liked this. A bit disjointed and needs to be scrubbed, spellingwise, but pretty ok otherwise...




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