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Lossing Grip (Lyric) by Katie2

Time slips through my fingertips My love for life is running thin The river of my tears, Is going dry My suicidal dreams, I’ve learned to live by (chorus) Ohh, Now I lay be down to sleep Lord please forgive me, for this deed, But the knife of my fears took hold, Tilted on my wrist till my body went cold Jumping into the clouds, Falling to the ground, Landing on my feet, Freedom from this pain is what I seek. You said you didn’t care, So I through my hands in the air, I’m dong with fighting, I’m done with pain, I’m done with all this shit that drives me insane. As the blade touches my skin, I pray to go once again. (chorus) I see the light, blinding. Finally my soul is free, Walking toward my dreams, Eternity, in your arms, My first choice wasn't wrong (2x chorus) ehhh it's my first TRY lol :P

Katie 3-Apr-03/8:35 AM
Thankz for the tip blind, it's nice to see that there are a couple of people still around here that actuall give advice. =) And some of my friends also write poems, and such, so I will ask them, thanks agian, I really didn't even think about showing them, I kinda never let them read my stuff, I'm shy about things like that, lol :P Katie shy!? yup yup! lol. =)~

Ps. Watch out for those Buffalo Eating Fruit Loopz ;)




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