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Day to Day (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

All the white Clouds have turned Gray From the darkest Points comes the Lightning Fully charged With angry Honesty Shouting loud And absolutely Clear Only to be drowned Out by the pouring Rain The troubled waters Fall and surround Us As I stand in the raging storm on What was once a bright and sunny happy Day I have to wonder if It'll ever be sunny Again.

god'swife 2-Apr-03/8:58 PM
adjectives & adverbs:

white
gray
darkest
fully
angry
loud
absolutely
clear
troubled(waters of course, what else)
raging
bright
sunny
happy
sunny

Stop watching Nickelodeon and read The Colossus by Slyvia Plath.

I give up, your all abunch of puddin'heads.





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