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Day to Day (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

All the white Clouds have turned Gray From the darkest Points comes the Lightning Fully charged With angry Honesty Shouting loud And absolutely Clear Only to be drowned Out by the pouring Rain The troubled waters Fall and surround Us As I stand in the raging storm on What was once a bright and sunny happy Day I have to wonder if It'll ever be sunny Again.

thepinkbunnyofdoom 2-Apr-03/1:38 PM
I'm trying to go with more medifores instead of just emoting all the time. I'm still working on this one tho cause I think that the meaning is just a little too deeply buried get thru.




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