Caducus2 Apr 2003

Not a bad effort but the chorus is so long per line it would be nightmare singing it without dying from lack of breath. My good friend (cough) poetandknowit is very interested in how you, me, and ranger and all us 'pimple poets' write in the style we do. I hope you can help him its a shame he has issues and I'm worried about him like I worry about what aftershave I should wear for work...7 (it needs to be downsized for a lyric). Horus is the lyricmeister you need his comments.