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you will feel (Free verse) by nentwined

you will feel my pain every ounce, every FLUID ounce of every drop of my blood as every razor scar erupts: one giant burst of ecstasy-- I AM HERE! and now I'm gone.

Frass 28-Mar-03/2:05 PM
'as every...' is a strong line, Nntwnd. I think there's more to this poem in your head; I'd like to read it.




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