god'swife27 Mar 2003

Waiting to die

"Waiting to die"

There is some promise here. Think carefully.

Curled like an autumn leaf
Waiting to die

is a brilliant line. I think I steal it from you, after all, I made it work.

Get rid of closed.

Get rid of in ( i will walk your trail)

"kicking dust up as I go"

What the fuck, this needs a deep cleaning, and I'm not giving anything away for free (anymore).

You know what your talking about but you have no skills.