poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Mirror to Mirror by Roisin.

<~>27 Mar 2003

yeah, that's a great image. but this one is so false, untrue, unknowing that it kills it, dead:

I lie nestled in wait
Curled like an autumn leaf
Waiting for life.

AUTUMN LEAVES ARE d-e-d DEAD!!!

buds lie culred and waiting, at the tips of the branches. unless you are waiting for the life of the flames--a conflagration to end all conflagrations.